A review of WMD
I posted WMD on a few poetry sites and contests as a lark...It seems that, if you don't know they were spam, they're crap?
This reader, who I think read WMD on one of those poetry sites I submitted it to, didn't like it:
Hello,
I’m sorry to say this, but I think your poetry is really bad. I am generally a hater of poetry, but your seems to be the epitome of everything I hate about poetry – it has no rhyme, it has no flow, it uses ugly words, and makes no sense.
Realise that if you poetry is not accesible to the common man, the common man will not read it.
I wrote back to ask where the sender read my poem, assuming it wasn't on this blog.
I'll let you know if I receive any more "reviews."
- Andrew
posted by Andrew Yahner @ 6/04/2004 11:42:00 AM
63 Comments:
Give him a critique on his own poem. If you missed it, here it is...
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Hello,
I’m sorry to say this, but I think your poetry is really bad. I am
generally a hater of poetry, but your seems to be the
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Realise that if you poetry is not accesible to the common man,
the common man will not read it.
****
Where's the rhyme and rhythm in that poem? Perhaps it was a rhetorical poem, giving an example of what the poem is talking about. I dunno, it confuses me.
Great idea, it is like people who creates art out of other people's trash, you create art out of spam!
Don't mind that guy who hates poetry, art is expression, express yourself! If he doesn't like, he is free to not read it.
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Maybe your anonymous reviewer likes Hallmark poetry, especially the ones in cards with puppies.
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Hi Andrew Yahner, I recently started a new blog called Ugly Blog so I've been searching around for ugliest related blogs to check out and possibly trade links with. I found this entry (A review of WMD) in my search so I thought I'd drop a line to let you know. Anyway nice blog and have a good day!
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